Now that was cool, I would have loved to get in on this track. The groove was right man and everything seems to be just right. You're pretty good for our first song.
I would have loved to throw in some ambient synths to form a melody in the background, maybe some bells with a little reverb (turn the volume down so not to take away from the grove you created.)
All in all, great piece look forward to your future work. I think you have inspired me to create something like this, thanks.